Script and Basic Updates

Last week, we began writing the script to our trailer. we attempted to piece together our ideas, characters and expected shots into it, however it didn't turn out as expected for Matt. This is normal though, since now we began developing upon it, cutting out sections, writing new ones in, and starting to REALLY bring our trailer into the light. The beginning of the trailer, she wrote both characters Laura, and Toby talking about villains of movies and what they do to their victims. Matt didn't like this, for he wanted the trailer to start out with a warm atmosphere, where students are just chilling and having fun. So we cut that section, and replaced the conversation with a normal, non-hollywood cliche conversation about drinking and ID's, and how Laura is picked on by Toby and probably his other friends. One other thing, is that we wanted to present Laura, as an innocent, sane heroine character, as for Toby, a sort of drunk stupid character who always dies first. This works well with the plot, for they've all just finished their night out and walking home. Laura asks if Toby could walk her home since the shortcut to her house is through the woods, and that its pitch black. He accepts, however he doesn't know what is about to come.

The first draft of the script, and the updates we made to it are presented below: